Comments on: Mitt Winstead’s Evil in the Mirror http://www.screwiowa.com/mitt-winsteads-evil-in-the-mirror/ Just another WordPress weblog Sun, 29 Aug 2010 23:33:22 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: Nina Romano http://www.screwiowa.com/mitt-winsteads-evil-in-the-mirror/comment-page-1/#comment-145 Nina Romano Wed, 31 Mar 2010 22:26:11 +0000 http://www.screwiowa.com/?p=326#comment-145 Okay. You got me. You jump right into the middle of the action--all good. I'm not sure if the foreign words were in italics and didn't show up on the website--but, remember, all foreign words go in italics. Do you know Spainish? If so, try usuing some other pejoritive words for "gringo"--hijo puta for one. Good luck. Great beginning. Okay. You got me. You jump right into the middle of the action–all good.

I’m not sure if the foreign words were in italics and didn’t show up on the website–but, remember, all foreign words go in italics. Do you know Spainish? If so, try usuing some other pejoritive words for “gringo”–hijo puta for one.

Good luck. Great beginning.

]]> By: Marni Graff http://www.screwiowa.com/mitt-winsteads-evil-in-the-mirror/comment-page-1/#comment-79 Marni Graff Wed, 10 Mar 2010 02:11:05 +0000 http://www.screwiowa.com/?p=326#comment-79 Mitt, this is an immediate grabber! A lot happens in a little bit of prose. The situation you describe leaves so many questions unanswered... Best of luck with the book! Mitt, this is an immediate grabber! A lot happens in a little bit of prose.
The situation you describe leaves so many questions unanswered…
Best of luck with the book!

]]> By: Melissa Westemeier http://www.screwiowa.com/mitt-winsteads-evil-in-the-mirror/comment-page-1/#comment-78 Melissa Westemeier Mon, 08 Mar 2010 18:43:56 +0000 http://www.screwiowa.com/?p=326#comment-78 Wow! That's a lot of action--some pretty dark writing, but I like it! The only advice I can offer is to watch the passive voice. Good luck with your book, Mitt! Wow! That’s a lot of action–some pretty dark writing, but I like it!
The only advice I can offer is to watch the passive voice. Good luck with your book, Mitt!

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